Hi, I'm Donovan Vazquez, with DON Enterprises. We've seen a huge need for washed and dried clothes, while not having to move the clothes from the washer to the dryer. Our company picks up old systems, applies them as a credit towards the newer more beneficial system, delivers, and installs the system to your location. I realized my last pitch, through the feedback, of just the 2 in 1 washer and dryer, was simple pitching an invention that I did not create. The new company is an original full-service idea utilizing the lack of use in the amazing 2 in 1 invention. This feedback was crucial in formulating a more viable idea for my company. Thanks for watching!
I think like you mentioned adding a service (similar to Lowe's does) would be very helpful in making a sale to get rid of the old one. Check out my pitch http://entgarrett.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2-talking-into-camera.html
I think that it is really great that you were able to bounce off your original idea while taking the critiques into strong consideration but still keeping the same concept. I do believe like Garrett said that there may be some places like lowes or home depot that do something similar but I see that you added the fact that you can get credit for you old systems kind of like a car dealership. What I may suggest as far as taking this idea one step higher is maybe creating some sort of charity as apart of the system. Maybe take the older washers and dryers and donate them to underprivileged families that can't afford them. I am not sure if thats the route you want to take but its just an idea. When you get the chance you can check out my blog here: http://theentrepreneuriaou.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-2-just-few-changes.html
I think with a little more practice you would have a great pitch because you have a very commanding voice. Good job on integrating some of the new critiques. You can check out mine here: http://sirahmora.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-2.html
I think like you mentioned adding a service (similar to Lowe's does) would be very helpful in making a sale to get rid of the old one. Check out my pitch http://entgarrett.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2-talking-into-camera.html
ReplyDeleteI think that it is really great that you were able to bounce off your original idea while taking the critiques into strong consideration but still keeping the same concept. I do believe like Garrett said that there may be some places like lowes or home depot that do something similar but I see that you added the fact that you can get credit for you old systems kind of like a car dealership. What I may suggest as far as taking this idea one step higher is maybe creating some sort of charity as apart of the system. Maybe take the older washers and dryers and donate them to underprivileged families that can't afford them. I am not sure if thats the route you want to take but its just an idea. When you get the chance you can check out my blog here: http://theentrepreneuriaou.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-2-just-few-changes.html
ReplyDeleteI think with a little more practice you would have a great pitch because you have a very commanding voice. Good job on integrating some of the new critiques.
ReplyDeleteYou can check out mine here: http://sirahmora.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-2.html